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hoSHIT by HaanPere hoSHIT by HaanPere
One hundred and fifty seven hours. I had done my training, I was ready. Had I really tamed a real Bleite? I can't believe what I see and hear, it's just so amazing! Me, a silent little nobody, ready to jump and face my destiny...
I look at the sky seeing the sun far ahead, shining at me, lighting up both my body and mind and take a deep breath. Fresh mountain air fills my lungs and I'm finally ready. Time to give the encouraging kick to her soft sides, time to take off, ti- what's that?!

A herd of yibbes flies by and she notices them before I do. My Bleite's hungry, she wants to go and catch herself one of the flying zexres. Some sharp movements, gnarling from excitement, she's ready to take off and suddenly I just want to jump off and run away. I try keeping her still as she tries to resist my will. A sharp snap steals my attention, is my mount trying to get free from these strings that are pulling her head back? A piece of black leather string waving in air confirms my suspicions and I understand that if i want to live to see tomorrow, I cannot keep her here. Pushing my legs tightly against her sides I finally give up on her and prepare myself.

But as she leaps...


I LOVE making him go through all kinds of shit, I really do. Sorry man but your story has SO many holes in there that I'm just dying to fill them and... So far I've only gotten these fantastic ideas of giving you some really nice close-to-death experiences >3>; Sorry again, mon. Have fun in the sky!

Haiiyah's south-east mountains, the most dangerous place in the whole worldNou, filled with scaly dragons, humans, bounty-huntery elves and Bleites. Tame one and it'll stay yours till you die.
So where's his one? Where's this female who is yet to be named? ...uhm... Can I really say she'd be dead? I mean he already lost his precious Sara :U
Let's say she's at the mountains where she belongs to. He left his life behind when he moved to Tain Sedo and this was one of the things he tried when he was still traveling. After all, it did take him a year to get there and he spent a couple of months with his Bleite. Now....
Wall of text. But I don't care. I have things to tell. Also the first one to include ?Ali-fukken-alias! to their comment gets a free Zexre. And now, let's go on with his story. So I still have to fill 11 months of that year BC

:icontealdeerplz: He's screwed.

Juan, Galk, Bleites and all this shit belong to moi. No using, no making yours, no nothing. you can look, you can wipe print it and your ass on it but don't make your own things, people. Doubt that you even want to but whatever.
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Dostor Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist

the highlighting of that fur just blows my mind

and those clouds... you are always so good at them <3
HaanPere Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanks man ;3; <333
Denychie Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010
Your stories are nice to read, and the expression on his face is just... XD

HaanPere Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010   Digital Artist
Thank you c:
o3o You mean Her? Since we can't see Juan's face at all.
Denychie Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010
Mhmm.. c;
SkulblakaSaphira Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010
Awesome work and story ;)
blazegryph Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I READ THE WHOLE THING SKULLFACE. I wish you wrote moar, your stories are so goood! I like reading textwalls. D: Also, :iconohuplz: putting your characters through so much~

It took me a minute to figure out where Juan was but then I saw the shadow on his Bleite and was like OOOOH. You did a great job with the shading/shadows there.
I really like those clouds btw. A lot. <3

What am I supposed to include? Dis? "?Ali-fukken-alias!" I don't know what that is herp derp.
HaanPere Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010   Digital Artist
HOMG 8U I did not think there'd be someone this SOON to have read it. I thought that, like, an hour would pass by and I'd be hearing Blaka's "awesome^^(enter) +fave" 8|
You made me happy <33

:iconohmeplz: I lieks to make them suffah!

It truly takes some time to see him there :lol: And those shoes are so. not. him. Omg. They just suited that situation so well >v>;
In the sketches he even has a <xU face :giggle:

Aaaaah thanks hunni ;3; <3
I had to do the clouds trice before they looked good enough for me xC I saw some awesome clouds on our way to the city yesterday and now the old ones looked too bad so... You do the math :U Preectionist dammit.

Myees. It's Ali the alias-man who popped into my mind when I tried to make up something stupid enough that wouldn't stand out from the text too much B3 So congrats, girl, if you want yourself an awesome Zexre, you're free to make one!
blazegryph Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xDD With time zones and whatnot you usually update when I check mah computer before work/school/stuff~ : D And yaaay comments that...are longer than one word that starts with 'a'. xD
And I try~<3

Aw D: That's happened to me too, when I'm outside and I'll be liek 'dayum those clouds are pretty. DAYUM MINE SUCK.' xDD

Andcoooool, I'll get on it after work! 8D SankyouSkull!
HaanPere Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010   Digital Artist
Well that's nice : D I wish I'd live in a zone in which that happens. Now that I come to Da, I only find things that are at least 5 hours old >___>
c: <3

I wonder if people find me freakish when I bike with my eyes locked on the clouds instead of the road. D: And I always take photos of them plus everyone knows I always draw skies with clouds :C I'm totally predictable.

YouwelcomeSammysammich c: <3
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